Jack and Jill: The Real Story

Jack and Jill: The Real Story

 

 

Jack and Jill went up the hill

to fetch a pail of water.

But Jill pushed Jack

and down he went,

with his water turning red.

 

Jill walked to his side,

checked his eyes,

took the pail

and left him to die.

Author's Note

a darker side of Jack and Jill

Reviews

[bookworm]

dark like Tim Burton dark, i like it

[Matilda Tyler]

I like this alot, so keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing more.

--M :)

[Eva]

Haha I like the turn on jack and Jill's story.

[A.Lee]

Oh, what a mean Jill! Nice twist on a familiar rhyme.

[Calypso]

Nice! What a wonderful twist on Jack and Jill!

[Allison]

Haha good job! Why would Jill do such a thing?!?!? Oh! And uhh I think in this case it might be pail instead of pale. But I'm not sure. Ohhh dictionary!

[SarahCortland]

this is funny great job