Snow flake in May

                                Skipping stones across a quiet stream

                                the sun shines on her smile.

                                Capturing my love like snowflake in May,

                                I slowly join the sky.

                                Floating up through trees and clouds

                                I've never felt so free

                                Upon the Earth I'ii never walk

                                as long as she loves me.

 

Reviews

[Stephanie]

Such a sweet poem with great imagery! Very nicely written