Your hug

I see you staring at me

trying to figure out what's wrong

I know it's always hard to see

what keeps me from moving on

 

You don't always know what to say

But when you give me one of your hugs

it feels like my problems fade away

and my life no longer sucks

 

I don't need words

just your hug

Reviews

[TransparentHearts]

Beautiful and so very true.

[Furlie]

love it

[Jibey]

Yes, yes... how we all feel sometimes

[Dillon Cotter]

Very sweet and sincere, enjoyed this poem.

-Will

[Jake Mancini]

I really like how straight forward you are in your writing. I mean, I love poems that sort of dance around the point, but sometimes it is nice to read something that really just lets you know. It is very sweet and it is something I think just about anyone in a relationship of any kind can relate to.
Very nice.

[charlotte talley]

this is real nice. i like it. the meaning you put behind it is so real. a person can truely relate to it. when he is starring at you he's like you said trying to figure out what's the matter, real men do that. and yes when they put their strong arms around us it makes us feel safe and secure. good write. keep it up.

[Justin D]

ahhh the thoughts behind true human desires are sometimes simplistic but realistic. very nice work with this poem. short and sweet and it gets striaght to the point

[Expression]

Goedzo, ga zo door, mooi geschreven, leuke tekst, rijmt leuk... Hmmm wat nog meer... Nice :'D

[StoryTailor]

sweet. very nice. well written. Is there anything left to say?