invisible tears

Invisible tears

stream down on my face

my lips frozen in a smile

Reviews

[Mr.Six]

this is great, and they arent wrong down there, you as a writer are really great too :) you have a few of these short sweet poems that are so powerful, im glad i read this one

[Furlie]

U really are great, qaralynn ;)

[Jibey]

Nice - to the point... the 'frozen smile' so telling

[ChristianM]

For someone who is still learning the english language you write more beautifully and from the heart than any of the American poets I've read on here.
Very moving

[Kevin Chelsea]

Don't know what you're shooting for, but it makes me think about times that I really don't feel like smiling and being a nice guy... but for friends and family, I have to. Show them my smile and make them laugh even when it's the last thing I really feel like doing.

I like this one.

[Jasmine]

wow. so short but so moving. you've summed up this combination of feelings in three lines. well done, love it. great write :)