you never came..

sang a happy song
in the middle of the night
waiting for you to drop by
cooked us some dinner
bought a bottle champaign
the only sad thing is
that you never came....

Reviews

[sugar]

it was goood there are some mistakes you could fix but still i enjoyed it, short sweet and sad

[Greg Close]

A sad piece. Very simple but very poignant. But, at least you had the champagne! ;)

[eccath]

interesting and very sad.

[Silere]

Disappointment is always an interesting theme to poems.. You captured your feeling quite well and made your readers feel it in the end. Nice job... Thank you for sharing this..

[cassie]

so sad, but sometimes all too true. Good write.

[Furlie]

that's... just sad

[Star Wolf]

Very very painful.

[Expression]

Dat is hard.