Too late

I'm walking through these empty halls
filled with memories of you
surrounded by a silent darkness
your feelings break through

And I feel your pain
I feel your tears stream down on my face
but it's too late

You're gone now

Reviews

[CrystalMoon]

i am in love with this. very nice and powerful write!(:

[Rossen]

gone...


good writing


Rossen

[Jeff]

Short but powerful. This is a perfect example of not needing to write out a long poem to express your feelings.

[Kes]

Wow, this is pretty... uh, wow! I love it. I actually got goosebumbs reading it, and very few things can give me goosebumbs!
I could feel it all, I could see it all. I'm impressed, to say the least.
Great!

[Hidden_identity]

Even though this poem is short there is a lot of emotion in is. I could see the girl in the halls and crying very vividly. Nice job.

[Inci]

very emotional...short verses are indeed powerful

[zendikar]

very powerful, yet nice and short it sounds like you lost someone dear...

[*~Kristy~*]

Short and simple, but packed with so very much emotion... I absolutely loved it...