You're like a knife

You are like a knife
I always get hurt
when I'm touching your wrong side
The cuts which you gave me
will finally keep me away
The scars that keep reminding me
will let the pain forever stay..

Reviews

[Grim]

A great message that found place only in a few lines. Amazing work.

[Jake]

Beautiful simile. Perfect.

[General Frost]

this poem is very good. and its also very true

[M.Babu]

Great flow to this!:) And i enjoyed the comparison so much...it was extremely unique! This poem was as sharp as the knife you describe:)

[Aurora Lynn]

This is a very well-written poem! I like the message that this poem sends, and you describe it very well. I especially like these lines 'The scars that keep reminding me/will let the pain forever stay..'
Over-all, very well done.