You were wrong..

You said life is too short,
don't leave things undone
But now I'm standing at your grave
And realize life isn't just about having fun
You never took anything serious
and went your own way
now I'm just wondering
if you said the same
while staring in the eyes of the death

Reviews

[Daniel Atkinson]

Short and powerful. It ends with a note of almost-happiness. Great work.

[Dushyant Thadani]

The ending has actually got me thinking a lot. The guy whom you wrote about has got one thing in his life, happiness. He is happy that he doesn't have any regrets possibly. Because life is too short for that. But this write is wonderful, and I like your perspective towards this idea. Great write. Good job.

[Sweets]

I love those kinds of poems!
It's short and simple!
The ending is fantastic! :D
Great work!

[Suheil Kapadia]

Wow. I've thought this exact same thing for somebody else. Only, you've written it more expressively. Well done :)

[Matthew vonHone]

Powerful.

[Murtuza]

Really serious stuff. Thought-provoking and well-penned. Nice job :)

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Gripping, a strong poem my friend.

[Jesse N. Wall]

important stuff to wonder