Innocence

Innocence..
Everyone longs for it,
Everyone loses it at some point

You can't capture it..

Author's Note

Innocence is so fragile..

Reviews

[Dushyant Thadani]

This write is very true... But we don't lose it all... There is a small part of it always remaining in us.

[Austin]

It took me a lot of thinking to grasp what such a simple little poem has to say. When I first read this, days ago, it didn't occur to me the conviction behind those words or the real meaning of them. I do understand, now, and I agree with everything you have written here. Thank you for writing this, and thank you for sharing it with the writerscafe community.

[alexlessah]

that is very true. i love how such little can mean soo much. nice job

[Mr.Six]

deffinately true :D well done, im beginning to like how short yet meaningful your writes are, deffinately starting to become a big fan :) keep up the good work and i hope to see some more good stuff!

[roy mccarthy]

nice write!