Fragile

I never meant for it to happen

but my walls fell down

in your warm embrace

and now I'm fragile

 

please be careful..

Author's Note

I love hugs :D

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

Love makes us vulnerable, that's why those we love & care about often times hurt us the most. Excellent poem. It has a very fragile and almost helpless feeling to it.

[mjmccabe]

Simple and real. Really cool.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Ah!..i know that feeling..to be oh so vulnerable and exposed and holding on to it cause of the love you feel.

[Indigo Ribbon]

The vulnerability of the poem is what truly makes it. The poem is short, yet hopeful, and scared, all at the same time. A stunning mix of sentiments :-)

[William Maisonave]

I really like this piece. Poetic in it's simpicity and very real. Good job

[Tommy]

Leaving yourself exposed and vulnerable, you would think it would weaken us, but with the right person, it makes us, oh so strong…

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy