that girl

humans hate those who are superior!!

 

They saw that hideous face

..

That ugly body

..

Those beastly hands

..

Her grisly orange eyes

..

That horrid face

..

Her frightful heart

..

But never they saw

..

Beneath

..

All that

Loathsome appearance

..

 The

Kind hearted

Dazzlingly

..

Beautiful

..

Refined

..

Elegant

..

Charming

..

Personality of hers!!

..

And they

Destroyed her

..

Without even touching!!

 

 

Reviews

[Mark]

We fear and destroy what we do not understand. Wouldn't it be grand if we all understood that we are part of each other? Connected and dependent, wouldn't that be the real beginning of humanity? Very great write here, particular impacted by the ending to destroy someone without touching.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Well thank you .. Glad you like it! : )

[Anita Harris]

You have a very great point. Great job :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

thanks!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

I love this! It's so true!
I love these parts especially:

"But never they saw
..
Beneath
..
All that
Loathsome appearance"

And:

"And they
Destroyed her
..
Without even touching!!"

Beautiful and inspiring job with this, thanks for sharing(:

[Muhammad Qasim]

iT was no problem and also thank you for reviewing! : )

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

No problem(:

[RachelReaper]

"and they destroyed her, without even touching" was the part I, I don't know about others, could relate to the most. nice job

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you!!

[Allycat]

It says so much in such little words
I live the message this poem portrays
its brilliant!
great job :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you for reviewing! : )

[Skye]

Amazing! This is a beautiful piece, and sadly, many times true.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thanks alot for the review!

[Skye]

No problem :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

: )

[David Scott]

I loved the poetry here. We often destroy the most worthy out of our ignorance or hate or more often insecurities... Not sure I agree with your statement under the title as an absolute truth... Great write.
Be well.

[Muhammad Qasim]

well thank you for reviewing firstly and thanks for sharing your opinion! it means alot!

[The Fallen]

the reality and the strong points in this make it a amazing poem I honestly love every thing about this. Beautiful write

[Muhammad Qasim]

Good to know that and thanks for reviewing!

[Enid Blake]

You make your point very clearly - I like it ;)

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you!

[Hamza]

this goes down to the physical level of sentiments ... with a tinge of reality ..
very impressive ..

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thanks alot for the review!

[Kushal]

Factual Poetry! Malala Yousufzai did not deserve this. Excellent write! :) :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

hmmm .. thanks for reviewing .. but what does Malala Yousaf Zai has to do with this poetry ?

[Kushal]

Ohh sorry...but I thought this was about the 14 year old young girl/activist who was shot by terrorists in Pakistan. This poem describes exactly this.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Oh well .. i didn't notice that part when i wrote it .. thank you for reviewing and letting me know of that!