sHattered trust!

Trust .. once broken can never be the same!!

My words

Exerted pain

Unknown to me

It broke

Pain was the reason

I was the cause

Expecting things to be the same

Until i thought it

That ignorence

Originated from me

I was innocent

But no more wise

It was all lost

For words that damaged more than i knew

Never could be taken back

Those words

For a page crumbled

Cannot be straightened as much as before

just like

TRUST

Reviews

[Moniba]

i'm speechless... this is very true.. And beautifully written.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Only a few lucky ones manage not to go through this phase .. And thank you for that wonderful review from the deepest parts of my heart!!

[The dark story]

wow...that was mind blowing.....that last stanza.it was just so powerful.....carrying a deep and strong meaning with it.....the emotions are juts flowing in it.nice work!!

[Muhammad Qasim]

Aww .. thank you : )

[dunnia]

very true but us human beings always find a reason to forgive others because we simply want to....

[Muhammad Qasim]

True that .. but even after forgiving.. most of the time they stay causious of others!! Thanks for the review

[RachelReaper]

"Pain was the reason
I was the cause" was my favorite line, because it just told me that this is the way it is, and that's that and that's life. Very nice, dark piece of writing.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you .. i also liked that line very much .. it's catchy! : )