Humans

just on the stupidity of humans!

We humans think

Yet

The world is on its brink

We drink

Yet

Ask why we shrink

We drive

Yet

Act unknown to those who strive

Naive

Yet

So brave

Even though

The birds fly

The fish .. In the sea .. Swim and not get dry

But us humans .. so sly

Then

Whyyyyyy ...... ??????????

Reviews

[Mary Christabel George]

We have mutual vibration for Humans.
Some questions always remained unanswered.
Good!

[Muhammad Qasim]

yeap... That's true

[Mary Christabel George]

:)

[The dark story]

"Naive
Yet
So brave"...hmm...true perception...what i liked the most about it is that you have used just few ines to make us ruminate on every thing and search for the answer...i liked it the most than most of your work!!1...great!

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thanks... it means a lot to me :) coning from such an influential person :)

[Rhianne Ney]

Then why, then what then when?
Well, this is a great one for a great poem!~

[Muhammad Qasim]

i was the one asking questions :P
thanks

[Rhianne Ney]

:d

[Muhammad Qasim]

hehe

[oxo]

this makes me think why too. nice poem.

[Muhammad Qasim]

its good to think .. just don't think too hard .. hehe .. Thank you : )

[oxo]

haha. yeah, you're right. thanks for that one > :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

hehe .. it was no problem : )

[Jordan's Back]

pilisophical.. nice

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank YOU : )

[Jordan's Back]

Quite Welcome my Philosophical friend

[Muhammad Qasim]

Oh well Thank you again :D

[Abdur Raqeeb]

We humans are now controlled by our emotions and we fail to utilize our brains. If someone enrages us, out anger causes us to wage a war or fight. If someone makes fun of us, we try to find an opportunity to make fun of him again. All this needs to stop. You have asked a brilliant question in the poem. Good Write!

[Muhammad Qasim]

Having emotions is our nature but it is our duty not to let them control us .. i agree with you on your point! Thank you for reviewing : )

[David Scott]

Now this was special friend. You said something profound and asked a universally relevant question. Very good poem!
Be well!
...see, I'm not just beIng mean... Ha:-)

[Muhammad Qasim]

I never thought you were being mean .. Just honest!! and i like honesty!! Thank you : )

[Kelsey]

A piece that really makes you think and wonder why we do the things we do. Nicely done. :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you!! : )

[InsanityWriter]

Very nice. :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you!!

[Hamza]

no words ... your's is much better, far much better than what i managed to write ..
excellent .. and so very true ...
"Naive
Yet
So brave"
perfect !!

and it's the *fish ... :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you .. oh and i totally made that mistake .. i'll correct it