love..Never again

just something i wrote as a comeback!

The love i so called my own 
Now gone 

All the way 
Never to sway 
It's at stay 
At that loveless bay 

Every coming day 
I dream as i lay 

Broken dreams 
In many countless reams 

My broken heart in pain 
Never again to gain 
Love .. That goes down the drain 
Worst than to lie under a train 

Over thinking brain 
Broken by the pain 

Once broken 
If broken 
then 
Never again 
Never again!!

Reviews

[The dark story]

Oh well that is very heartfelt piece of writing…I now see that you have used a good rhyming scjeme here(see how practice grabbed you…youir rhymes have expressed themselves well this time )…I liked the touch of despair and sorrow here…nice work!!

Posted 1 Month Ago

[Muhammad Qasim]

hehe!!! practice makes a man perfect afterall! thanks

[Mary Christabel George]

Is is it something that you have decided that you will not fall in Love again after "Break-up"

[Rhianne Ney]

I hope it will really stay on Never Again. Nobody wants to get hurt for a long time without having the slightest hopes of being healed

[Muhammad Qasim]

it's quite a long shot.. u know us teenagers after all

[Rhianne Ney]

:D

[Muhammad Qasim]

:)