Ocean Eyes

Shining a fire
Dark like the night
How can your eyes
Be both black and bright?

Quiet and constant,
The deepest ocean,
Still, then raging
With pulsing emotion

A tranquil-yet-turbulent
Mystery,
At peace with
Electricity,
And when they glitter,
It burns through me,
Like eating ice cream
Too quickly

And by your gaze, I’m
Swallowed down
Captive until
I gladly
drown

Author's Note

Let me know what you think. Thanks!

Reviews

[Poet]

Could possibly be better. (shining not shinning) I think you did a good job but I think there's room for revising.

[Qavah Simchah]

Thanks! I'll take another look at it.

[Poet]

No problem

[Coyote Poetry]

The eyes can steal the heart and mind. Nice vision create by the good description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Qavah Simchah]

Yes, they can. Thank you!