Fear

What’s making me doubt?
What’s keeping me here?
I stay in known places,
I hide in my fear

Louder than thunder
And wide like the sea:
Everything is
So much bigger than me

The size and the roar,
It scares me to death,
I crumble beneath it,
I worry my head

What if Love can’t save
A sinner like me:
Shaken by thunder
And drowned by the sea?

Fear 's strumming lies
And Love wants to sing
Who will I believe?

Author's Note

Thoughts and constructive crit. welcome!

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

very good beginning flow really kept me reading
content is nice-
I am not good at constructive offerings I feel like I am being mean-but the title should be a little stronger why not use-who will i believe that last line is great
some people don't think much of titles but for me it is the first key to wanting to read or not wanting to read -if it doesn't draw them in then what will
thank you so much keep writing you are great at flowing lines

[Qavah Simchah]

Thank you so much! That was not mean at all; I need to know this stuff :)