Three Words

Not much to say here except for a little fact that this was written in a feministic concept. Hope you like it.

There were only three words that I wanted to hear,
Three words that you so fear.
Three words would have immortalized us,
Three words, but you messed up.

Just three words and you were to be forgiven
Three words and the game made even
Three words for one last chance
Three words, but you were so proud.

Now, I have two words just for you.
Just two words for our closure
Two words, my lasts and nothing more.
Just two words for three words you owe me.

"Get Out!"

Author's Note

Image Disclaimer: I do not own the image included. I just found that it suited my piece so there you go. Special thanks to the original artist.

Reviews

[Bear]

This made me smile... three little words that I hear more so than I used to and ya know why? I say it more often than I used to and another "wanna know what"~~ the more I say it the more I hear it in reply! Those three little words aren't as hard to say as I thought they were and once said, it flows like water or fuel to a flame. Three little words..... say them to those you care for as often as possible for we know not when we might not see them again.... if ever; and who'd want to regret not telling them those three little words before they were never more to be seen? Good write!! And I am speaking from a woman's point of view; "hear me roar".... meow. ;~) Sallie Bear

[Mistral Bilgera]

i like the vengeance in the end... =) it tells a lot about love, and how pride can ruin it, albeit the briefness of just three stanzas.

good writing!

by the way, taga-Bataan ako. =)

[Pj]

Pure awesomeness! I love your structure and flow. The steady beat until the very last words "Get out!" just made the words even more stronger.