It goes on

would really love it if i could get more and more reviews.... a poem about life ad reality hope everyone likes it :)

cherish the things god gave you

don't ever pretend you were not selfish too

surviving is the greatest thing so far

life goes on with sorrows and struggles 

so be aware

sometimes you smile, sometimes you fear

but that doesn't mean life is unfair

tears roll down, you feel hopeless

but the day will surely come with a bag full 

of happiness

don't judge anyone for what they do

cause god sent everyone with a distinct

purpose as you.

Author's Note

a poem about life and reality, hope to get a lot of positive reponses, so that i can post more and more of my creativity in the coming days... give me a lot of reviews and let me know if you would like to hear more from me.

Reviews

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

There is a great message in this piece and I love the honesty. Keep writing, there is always something beautiful found in the honesty and emotions we set free.

Sheer Terror