Assorted Poems...

These are two poems I wrote using an app on my iPod

Ah, they settled as brave

Teeth pointed doubtfully

To the second promise.

Who places tears between

Answers encouraging murders?

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Open tomorrow after the

Bell yells to me.

Three shrieks helpless

When things sleep.

The charming coward has his reasons.

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Reviews

[Walk away slow poet]

I like this, I think it's very neatly done. Enjoyable read.

[Seshat Nidaba]

I like this, it's as if a promise of some poetic potential. It's alluring, but to what and leading where I cannot tell.