Until I Am Nothing

Pieces of me,

Falling away

Until I am nothing...

Nothing, they say

Try so hard,

Try as I may,

I cannot ignore,

I'm compelled to obey

Bro ken

Frac tured

Sh at te red

I stay...

While pieces of me keep falling away...

Author's Note

Something I wrote recently when I was talking a walk by myself on the nature trail near my house :)

Reviews

[Tasha]

I loved how you broke up the end! Wonderful poem..very creative.

[Ramya]

Though short, this one is a good poem! I love the way you have split the words in 3rd stanza...that is unique. Simple and enjoyable, good piece:)