Tell Me So

Tell Me So

A Poem by Quinn W
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A song that I randomly just made up. The lyrics tell a story to me but may not be understandable to you. Sorry.

"
'Cause I    need you
and I        want you.
But I don't
know how
No I don't 
know how
to tell you so-o-o-ooo


And you    need me
and you    want me
but you don't 
know how
no you don't 
know how
to tell me-e sooo.

But I need need you
and I want you-oo to-oo

Tell me so
'Cause I need to know
That you love me too
That you love is true.

Yes, you love me too-oo-oo-oooo.

© 2016 Quinn W


Author's Note

Quinn W
I realize that you have no idea how this song goes but maybe try to make the lyrics into your song. I'm going to try to make a piano accompaniment to this song later. So excited!

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Sometimes two people really do need each other
but they dont know how to just let go
and say it !!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like it! Very meaningful lyrics, and I think piano would make this song flow beautifully. If you do add the piano, you should send a video my way. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a very cute & catchy tune. I'm not musically inventive, so I'm not hearing music, but I can definitely feel the beat. I wish I could simplify sometimes & come up with a catchy little ditty like this instead of my long-winded complex messages. I think your main premise is at the crux of much loneliness. Many people are sitting around NOT saying it, but wishing someone would.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on October 27, 2016
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Quinn W
Quinn W

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I have always enjoyed reading. It has taught me many things others just can't explain to you. It has also fueled my love of writing. I love writing short stories, they're my creative outlet, Mom would.. more..