Unfortunate indeed

Unfortunate indeed

A Poem by AlwaysNewbie
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A small reflection

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Unfortunate? Indeed...
I owed it to the creed
A mission, which
I failed to Succeed!
It started not so long ago,
First job, First wage
I looked for more,
Indeed...
And there I stood, 
My portfolio was good
I stood above everyone else!
And it only made sense...
That they picked me? Indeed...
That order, was not even a job
Delighted by the ease
I ended up as a complete snob!
And pain of failure, does not seem to cease
What a desease...
To be cursed by greed,
And now exiled from the source
That used to feed...
My interior resource.
Oh, what a shame? Indeed...

© 2013 AlwaysNewbie


Author's Note

AlwaysNewbie
Tried my best

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Having a job has its good and its bad I guess. Nice piece. Maybe you could make the rhyme parts a little more coherent; that would make it better I think.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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AlwaysNewbie

12 Years Ago

Cheers, Will try to :D

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Hey, Just write about anything really, when in the mood may come up with something good. Always willing to help anyone more..