The colors of life and beyond part 1

Heaven is white and gold

It sounds like a choir

It tastes like bread

It smells like nature

It looks bright and light

It makes me fell joyful

Reviews

[hi]

ok true i think and i agree,to me if the poem was long it would almost chage the feel so good thing it was short

[Fahmida Mehreen]

May these colors of joy be entitled to us.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Create beautiful and hopeful place. You made Heaven a worthwhile journey. Thank you Rachel for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote