Circles

A question to the other

A fight to another.

 

It’s a never ending cycle

Round and round it goes

Always the same story

Tears always flow.

Reviews

[AbsentElements]

It is short, but it makes it all the more powerful. Amazing.

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

Brevity is the key to this poem. Such vividness in a few lines.
The last line was a punch too. Wonderful write. This is a fave!

-Lex

[Manda]

wow this was really good! i totally know what you mean! its hard going through this same cycle over and over again! sometimes you just want it all to just end! the flow and grammar was perfect! short and sweet and to the point!

[Jai]

Why do I feel like I get you? :( You have some great connection with words, Rach! Keep on writing.

And yes, tears always flow.