Haiku Demise

A Poem by Rae Newsome

my first haiku

He lifts the dull knife

Pleasure flashes through his eyes

The beast is unleashed

© 2016 Rae Newsome

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Tamika

Though so few words you have been able to capture a feeling for me of both sorrow and eeriness, you've used the words very wisely, I commend you on such a small though wonderful piece of writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steve

is he the beast?
or is the beast a tiger?
why did he pick up a dull knife?

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on April 30, 2016
Last Updated on April 30, 2016

Author

Rae Newsome

Greenwich, OH

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I like to read and write. I have two beautiful daughters that are the reason i live. more..