Like Magic

Like Magic i want to make it all happen...

Like magic
I’ll light the sky
Lift my hand to caught the clouds.
I’ll spread wings for you, like magic
Fly away with you
To seas beyond.

I’ll steal you,
I’ll save you
I’ll be there every time.
I’ll say the right things,
At every wrong moment
I’ll make you smile,
I’ll make you laugh,

Giggling till sunrise
Like magic I’ll tell you,
A phrase or two or three
I’ll whisper words all bubbly
That they stir you stomach with butterflies
I’ll make things happen that set your heart afloat
I’ll never let it fall,

I say this all,
And secretly all I want to be
Is to be the receiving end.
Like magic, I want to smile
Loose all those bad feelings
Vanquish the evil
With superhero powers

Like magic I want to make wishes
Like magic I want to find love
Like magic I want you
Like magic I conquer away dark reality.

Like magic, I want you to show me
What can be done,
So that I don’t need magic
Because everything’s all too good.

 

Author's Note

I put feelings in at random. but it's really choppy, i think. but i don't know. Personally i like the feeling of it, but its too pattern, pattern, switch to a new pattern, new pattern, switch to a new new pattern, new new pattern, etc.

Reviews

[[untitled]]

its magical and had a good flow well written

[ANT]

I enjoyed it and didn't think it was choppy at all. Very pretty.

[Marlena]

I think it flows perfectly, its such a sweet poem. ^^

[Tallulah]

i love this. i dont think the pattern is choppy. i think this is so beautiful.