noone knew

a little boy make a bet and it dosnt end right

  noone knew

i die that day

noone knew

that bet i made

noone knew

the water was cold

noone knew

i couldnt swim

noone knew

it was my last day on earth

noone knew

theyd be puting rose on my grave

noone knew noone knew

 

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Good flow. I like the imagery and the path.

Shame he died.

Matthew

[Katannaism]

Noone should be separated into no one- But this is a very good piece indeed. I like the emotion juxtaposed here.

[hopelove]

really sad and scary two thumbs up

[Just a Dream]

really sad but really good.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really lovely, dark, and sad. You never know if it's going to be the last time you see a person so you have to be careful about the way you treat people!