stars

a poem about stars

so free

just hanging there

no worries at all

 brings hope for the small

wishing for those

that needs a smile

as bright as hope it self

so no more fears

no more scars

if you need help look to the stars

Reviews

[quinfinn]

my sentiments precisely, lovely little piece. i like it.

[Gone]

I like it

[Cricket Kidd]

you should take out the 'but' on the fourth line, it would help it flow a little more.
I love looking at the stars! Good write!

[Just a Dream]

love it!!

[Evan Kleve]

A nice light read, with a lovely meaning. Bravo.

[WhoIsAmelia?]

i like the simplicity of this poem, yet it still manages to get the point across. sort of like how simple stars look, yet how much they inspire :)

[Fairytale]

Sweet, light poem. Thank you for sharing it.