evil

thers no words for this

is that your head

on the couch

is that your legs

hanging from the door

is that your arms

on the floor

is that a knife

in my hand....opps my bad

Reviews

[Mr.Six]

lmao i love the last part that made me smile, although it is pretty grim :P

[Joiedevivre]

ha! i liked this too, surprising and enjoyable. (if sinister)

[SheWhoWillNotBeNamed]

Hahaha! I found this one funny. Not sure if that was your goal or not. Great idea and well written!

[Katannaism]

Good write. Very simple, short but just straight to the point. It just gets there. Nice job, a clever piece.

[PaleWriter]

LOL, that was good. I didn't expect that at all. I like it as well, clever.

[Just a Dream]

i like it.

[Matthew Kult]

I like the anger and the shock value. I like the idea that you are willing to cross doors and see it from a different view. Good write.

Regards,

Matthew

[Gone]

I like it