you.............

how you make me feel

you make my heart pound
you make my laugh a sound
i see your smile even though your miles away
I cant help but feel this way
you make my day
you make me feel free
i can be me :)

Author's Note

hope you like :S

Reviews

[Katannaism]

I definitely liked this one. Your style of short poetry is very simple but it just stands out and speaks, nay, screams volumes. But I'd suggest/advise a bit more description or more tinges of how the emotion supposedly projected just added in to really make a strong impact.

[quinfinn]

cute, personal and heartfelt. i enjoy honesty.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was a cute poem. It made me smile. I think some guys can make you feel this way. I know some can make me feel this way...but the guys in my school suck...so they don't...lol I hate most of them. Thanks for sharing. :D

[Magdelena]

Wonderfully done.. I loved the images this brought out

Mags xx

[Cricket Kidd]

I like your poems, most of them would work as song lyrics. this one in particular would make a good chorus.

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I liked this. It's simple and romantic. The last two lines made me smile. I think that using more figurative language would make it more powerful and unique. Also, just one tiny thing...in the third line, "your miles away" should be "you're."

[Just a Dream]

i really like this one

[Joiedevivre]

i like! drops of love :)