i want to be your prinecess

read it and find out :)

I want to be your prinecess
but i have no crown
I want to be your hero
but i cant fly around
I want to be your lover
but i have no haert to share
I want to be your lyrics to your song
but you dont care
I want to be the hand that you hold
but your to far away
I want to be your bride
but cant be treated this way
I want to be your first
but you hid behide a mask
I want to be your furture
but not your past
I want to be your sunshine
and Iwant you to be mine:)

Author's Note

yea.........

Reviews

[Cricket Kidd]

Yeah, it needs some spelling work. and punctuation.
I like the idea and rhyme scheme though. very good!

[Katannaism]

Should proofread this and do some grammar check before posting this out. Like
'behide a mask' should be behind.
But other than those few, small mistakes, this is a beautiful poem. Very sweet, tragic.. melancholic... Its just simple and exquisite. Lovely.

[Just a Dream]

awe! that is so sweet. good job keep it up