tears

read it

wet tears fall and fall
for my fears like a rivers
no one knows but me

Reviews

[Danielle Nicole]

I liked it, haiku's are hard to do and even harder to send one definite emotion through, but I think you did this quite well, although I think that it should be river instead of "rivers." It just sounds better when I say it aloud.

Very well done :)

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I don't know much about haikus, but I thought this was well written. I can empathize with the feeling you describe.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like this haiku. It was good...but then again...I don't write haiku's. Thanks for sharing.

[Jessiee]

the shortness and emotion in it has a huge impact on it, it kind of reminds me of me right now, but very well written. great job. :)

[Cricket Kidd]

It makes me think of times I've felt like this, sad and utterly alone. I think everyone has moments like this.
I like it!

[Katannaism]

This is very melancholic. Short, simple yet effective in many ways. The sadness in the poem just speaks volumes in this short piece. Well done.