11

read it eveyone forgets 11

i close my eyes

count to three

i open my eyes

count to four

start to run

count to five 

stop and set up camp

count to six

get some water

count to seven

think why am i running

count to eight

grab my gun

count to nine

put it to my head

count to ten

pull the tringer.....

 count to eleven

am not dead....

Reviews

[Kiri Nells]

Nice! I think it could use some cleaning up but nothing serious. Great write! :)

[raindroplove]

i really like this one idk why it just ......idk

[The old me]

this is really good. i read over it a few times, it really is visual and good.