i dare you

read it

my mind is out of its mind

its doing thing i dont do

its thinking i liked you

maybe it true

come on inside

i give you aride

let you see what  i see

let you be me

go though my troubles

i bet you see double

i bet you cant handle it

.......fill my shoes

i dare you......

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Powerful and lasting, grips the reader, well done, great read.

[Jessiee]

i love the message in this. its very meaningful. i loved it, great writing :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

interesting, very powerful thoughts! you write so well!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked the meaning in this poem too. I think you did a good job on this. Thanks for sharing. :D

[Eli]

Nice meaning. I do have a problem with the first line; a little awkward way to start I think. But other than some grammer issues, it's a nice simple poem :)

[Lily Mae]

Great write.. :) x

[Short.Nerd]

Love it!

[Alicia Hirshey]

this is cute. I love the last two lines. "fill my shoes, I dare you."
If only more people took the time to actually see the world as others do and to see the problems that others have, they wouldn't be so quick to judge. great work.

[Butterfly Ninja :3]

nice!