Burning rain septembers cry..

Burning rain septembers cry..

A Poem by raizel
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its about a song i heard, called "traveling soldier"

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That september i lost the pain,
standing with you in the rain,
you took it and planted the seed,
dancing laughin with your beads,
i thought my life would never turn,
now only for you do i yearn,
my entire soul a deep dark trench,
contracting heart clench unclench,
painting canvas is my soul,
when im with you it makes me whole,
when were apart it makes me weep,
i sit and let the darkness creep,
blue jeans stain your legs,
i need you bad dont make me beg,
crack my nuckles crack my neck,
jump right in oh what the heck,
the finale comes before the start,
its clear to me i lost my heart,
a token of my true feeling,
dizzy kiss sets me to reeling,
a glimpse of the days to come,
chokes me up seductive rum,
a grand old house and marble floors,
welcome in is by the door,
sitting with you on the beach,
you suck my life my lovely leech,
the burn the itch the painfull urge,
my feelings are a rushing surge,
the drive to please is killing me,
vultures above i do now see,
a blub in my head catches light,
hurting me as it burns bright,
for now we walk hand in hand,
in my heart you leave your brand,
unrequitted love brings hurt,
why did i have to say it first,
i put my whole self on the line,
this dizzying day so sweet as wine,
buy you have not given yourself to me,
say it back or set me free.

© 2011 raizel


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Added on June 26, 2011
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raizel
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im bi, im 16 as of 2 weeks ago. if u got a prob with me then f**k off, i dnt take no s**t. im wiccan. and i love to write. more..