Addiction

Addiction

 

He could have killed me,

Instead,

He choose to love me more,

I was his slave, 

Yet he was all mine,

I saw him coming towards me,

I wanted to escape,

But it was just bed all around me,

He wanted to tear me apart,

Maybe that was his way of loving me,

I hated him, 

Yet I couldn’t resist him,

My naked soul was begging,

For forgiveness,

But his every bite made me taste him more,

I was his drug, 

Yet I was addicted to him.

 

Raj

29/12/17

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your message is powerful & vividly painted. I love the way it can be read a number of ways -- it can be addiction to a drug, or addiction to a person, or addiction that makes us do things we can't stop ourselves from doing. In any of these cases, you've helped us feel that "stuck" feeling. My favorite thing about good writing is when things are expressed with high originality, as is yours (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[raj24]

THANKS FOR LIKING IT MARGIE :).. IT WAS MORE ABOUT THE ADDICTION WITH PEOPLE WE ARE IN RELATIONSHIP WITH N SOMEHOW WE JUST CAN'T GET OVER OFF, LOVED YOUR REVIEW..THANKS FOR READING..KEEP SHARING N WRITING..GOD BLESS YOU :)

[Yari Garcia]

Very interesting and intense poem. Was this inspired by someone in real life?

I liked the play between the two people~ who was the slave and who was the addict? Him? You? Both? Very interesting poem indeed.

Yari

[raj24]

No, not inspired from real life, its just love is like an addiction. You just cant resist the temptation no matter which role you chose to play. Thanks for such wonderful review .

Raj

[Mrudula Rani]

We are genetically predisposed to addiction, whether it is to love or to chemical substances! We can only control it to some degree.your writing speaks very beautifully about addiction. I enjoyed reading your work - all the best.

[raj24]

THANKS MRUDULA :)..I REALLY ENJOYED READING YOUR WORK TOO :).. I FEEL WE SHOULD BE ADDICTED TO FEW THINGS..BUT ONLY TO AN EXTENT..:)