Some Life I Have

Some sounds I sing
Some art I draw
Some notes I play 
Some words I write
                     Some air I breathe
                     Some grains I eat
                     Some sun I soak
                     Some water I splash 
Some earth I rest
Some sky I gaze
Some flowers I smell
Some thorns I touch
                     Some love I get
                     Some hate I earn 
                     Some anguish I have
                     Some comfort I seek 
Some tears I shed
Some laughter I make
Some toil I do
Some sweat I wear
                     Some truth I live
                     Some lie I hide
                     Some child I hold
                     Some mother I lose
Some seeds I sow
Some weft I weave
Some life I have 
I ask no more

Reviews

[JE Falcon]

I like where you have gone with this statement of humility, this poem of acceptance. But I feel the last line needs to be less fact and more from your heart. ("I ask for no more" but I shall not cast more aside.)
(My soul is content) --- (Grateful, am I) --- etc.