A Dreadful Sight

This poems deals with adverse effects of nature.

 

O Flood! O Flood! Stop your course, 

Where are you going with such a force? 

Are you annoyed by the deeds of man? 

Are you going to hit and slain? 

Yes, yes my dear poet; you understand 

The feelings of the water and the land 

But your brethren might forget 

The adverse effects that nature beget. 

Calm down, Calm down, O massive Wave! 

Isn't there's a way to save?  

The entire mankind will vanish 

By your wrath, they will banish. 

The time has gone my dear poet, 

Just wait and watch the dreadful sight.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar problems

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

The entire story made me to realise that humans are on the verge of extinction. They should abate their actions which is harmful for the purity of nature. You presented a serious issue in an attractive way, which I liked most. Thank you for sharing such a deep poem.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[CMC]

Your poem captured the very essence of nature's wrath, a rebellion against man in a flood. The visual you paired with the poem was marvellous as well. Thank you for sharing!

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot dear Chris. 😊😊

[PandaPeaceful]

A very interesting creative piece. I enjoyed the chaos and the stirring that swirls around the words. Keep it up!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much dear. 😊😊

[PandaPeaceful]

No problem. You deserve it.

[Priyanshi]

Entire poem was an issue of concern and need to be focused well upon it ..... nature acts leaves none...very well penned the poem, Raj.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[Priyanshi]

You're welcome.

[Surya]

Rage of nature for unpleasant acts of humans....
We have to suffer for the disturbance we created....
I liked it...:)

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you dear writer.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very earnestly. I agreed fully.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Oh my, what a storm, the rage, the rush the power

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you sir!

[Coyote Poetry]

The great storms. Not kind and they can destroy places and cities in minutes. I enjoyed your description. You made the storm come alive with your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you for your appreciation.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed your work.

[wordman]

well we have been destroyed by water a few times,but there is more to come

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much dear. Yes, the natural disasters will one day vanish us all. 😞😞

[Jackie]

Your piece is inspiring, creative and concerning. Please do, go ahead and check out mine as well. And thanks for sharing i truely enjoyed the read

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much dear. I am going to read yours too. 😊😊

[LAROB]

Honestly poetry isn''t really my thing but I liked it. I like the images your writing creates.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much dear. Thank you for your appreciation. 😊😊