My God, My Magician

The poem highlights the value of god's mercy and his everyday works for his children.

Everyday he shows me different tricks,
Always he acts as a Sorcerer.
From the cluster of my pains he picks,
And he acts as my deliverer.

Cardician of my life you are, 

Your words acts as a thumper.
In your hands are my fortune cards bizarre,
And I believe the success will be bumper.

Your blessings are enchantments for me.
Paranormal are your works in my life.
I am singing your praise now and always be,
Your mercies and boons are rife.

O My God! My Magician! Keep doing your magic.
You are the only one who delivers me from this life tragic.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

“Your blessings are enchantments for me.
Paranormal are your works in my life.
I am singing your praise now and always be,
Your mercies and boons are rife.

O My God! My Magician! Keep doing your magic.
You are the only one who delivers me from this life tragic."

It is a very good part of this work which is really filled with optimism. I liked your faith over the God. It is the very humbleness in you which makes you to compose this work. Thank you for sharing.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[barleygirl]

Your message of God's blessings & mercies is stated with originality. It's nice to read something about faith that doesn't use all the usual phrases. For example this: "success will be bumper" and "blessings are enchantments". The word "rife" (end of 3rd stanza) doesn't seem to be used properly, as it has a bad (not good) connotation. Since you want me to ignore grammar, I won't tell you that bizarre is misspelled *wink! wink!*

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you a lot dear. I had corrected the mistake. Thanks for your review.

[Great Aunt Astri]

A cleverly done poem, I love your choice of words, and the poem rhymes! The message, too, is attractive. (Although some 'westerners' might have slight qualms with the word 'magician.' The word 'sorcerer' is very similar (here) and that has connotations!!! But that is just me being finicky. I loved your poem!

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot dear. I really appreciate your review. 😊😊

[Surya]

Haha, true indeed..I enjoyed it..:)

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks dear.

[Priyanshi]

Good poem, Raj.
God shows his magic and showers mercy upon us ....
Its our believe in him and his magics that keep us connected with him ..... Loved it

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much dear Priyanshi. 😊😊

[Priyanshi]

Pleasure is mine

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the positive feel of the words.
"My Magician! Keep doing your magic. You are the only one who delivers me from this life tragic. "
The above lines are needed. We need people who make us hope and laugh. Thank you Raj for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you for your support dear Coyote. Thanks so much. 😊😊

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my honor and you are welcome.