A Mathematical Rhapsody

This poem shows the sentiments of a mathematician towards his lover in mathematical form.

I doubt; Can I live long rather?

As we both are parallel lines, which do not meet each other.

To understand you is a task very hard;

Before that, the problems of Mensuration I will regard.

Expressions of your face frequently deviates,

That the comprehension of sine and cosine alleviates.

Our only meeting of love made me disappoint.

It was like a tangent that meets a circle only at one point.

I promised you there that all your expenses I will afford.

As I am the diameter of my family circle, which is the longest chord.

My love towards you will truly suit.

It is a quadratic equation of real root.

In your friend circle, I was too your friend.

But I was like an Arithmetic Progression's term of the end.

Your deception make me full of sorrow,

My life becomes as a cylinder hollow.

In your love, I myself dangle.

I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.

It seems to me that I am an endless construction. 

Author's Note

It is a little weird and humorous.

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

“In your love, I myself dangle.
I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.
It seems to me that I am an endless construction."

I should really applaud this work of you for both of its parameters- unique and humorous. I am really startled how one can knit a poem, a poem of love, through the central theme- Mathematics. It is really an amazing work. Somewhere I find rhymes a little odd, but it's effect outshone by this amazing love comedy. Thank you for sharing.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks from the core of my heart!

[Anjali]

Kudos for your title!
This poem is such a masterpiece.

[John the Baptist]

Math was always my worst subject, but I like the way it is used metaphorically in this one. The symbolism is unique and makes its point well.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Akki]

WOW... I can never Imagine love and maths together. You wrote really good and this is the one of the most best poem of you I ever read.

I like the main concept behind your poem. This poem is a perfect to show your creativity and imagination to the world.

My fev. lines are:
I promised you there that all your expenses I will afford.
As I am the diameter of my family circle, which is the longest chord.


I received so many read request from you.
But, I was inactive since few months so, I can't reviewed your work that time.
I hope you understand it.

Anyway, thanks for sharing and I love to read this and Enjoyed a lot.
Keep writing! : )

[Raj Sahu]

I thank you from the depth of my heart. 😊

[Nipplegrinder]

Even though I mostly hate math, there is much to love about this piece.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you! 😊

[Riddhi]

Ah...I really liked it..And actually to be true its not weird but rather unique...And it really requires a lot of creativity to make such a poem...Seems like you like maths a lot and that is the reason you can make such a poem ....Keep it up...Good job..
Keep on writing..

[Raj Sahu]

It's very ironical but I hate maths. Thank you very much.

[Riddhi]

Oh..Do you really hate maths????

[Raj Sahu]

Yup! It's true

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Wonderful love it- yes it’s all in the addition and subtraction- multiplying ad dividing that love comes to be- not always easy to balance the equations but the results are sometimes worth every word sum and quantity unexplained- love can be a real mystery - only to be calculated by real geniuses- sometimes better to just go with one and one is two...🌹

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot dear!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Pleasure🌹

[Ace Jaxon]

I love the lines "My love towards you will truly suit. It is a quadratic equation of real root." and the lines, "In your friend circle, I was too your friend. But I was like an Arithmetic Progression's term of the end." They really spoke to me about how love from someone can be true, and how friendship is like family, until one false turn.

[Raj Sahu]

Your words are so true. Thank you so much.

[Ace Jaxon]

no problem, just trying to be honest

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thankyou for your awesome poem showing mathematical and love intertwined. I like it, its diferent.
thanks for entry into romantic competition. still going through many entries yet!
thanks again good luck

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Ok welcome

[Abhishek Pahuja]

Among all the poems written by you, this is the best. The way you connected your situations with these mathematics is wonderful.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much dear!

[AllauraRose]

This is a very good poem! I love how you used math terms when talking about love. This is very well written and I absolutely love this! Sorry, I like math so I'm a bit of a math geek. Great work none the less!

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot.