Chivalrous Thoughts

This is a poem based on power of fiery thoughts of a poet.

My enamoring thoughts that emerges always,

From a fictitious source inside the body.

They proved to be grueling for some;

Fascinating for others and confounding for many.

My provoking thoughts, flamboyant shaped;

Sometimes flaccid but autonomous always,

Seems to form a colossal hallucination.

But they depicts deep meaning over minds.

A fusillade of thoughts leave profound marks over many.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This feels like an analytical description that goes well with your space-age artwork. I admire your complex vocabulary: "grueling" . . . "confounding" . . . "provoking" . . . "flamboyant" . . . "colossal" . . . such words don't give your message a poetic feeling but conveys the harshness of the situation. This feels more like wordplay than a distinct message that really captures something with familiarity. Wordplay is a good thing, by the way.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[PoeticBlindness]

Thoughts are the generators of actions. Such thoughts, full of gallantry, makes you a wise person before me. Good read.

[Raj Sahu]

Oh! So kind of you. Thank you so much.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

And yes words should have an affect or effect- we need to think feel appreciate and walk a while in others shoes to truly understand and experience life through others footsteps making us realise at time that things could be worse- everyone has a story to tell and learnnfrom eachother we need to- 🌹

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[HappySad]

Great thought that make someone push their limits and challeng themselves to continue thriving. Great writing and continue striving!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Thank you for entering my competition
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I like this very clever

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[User]

This is truly lovely writing my dear

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much!

[ElizaB]

Wow! Very colourful and your chosen photograph was striking!

Thank you for entering, I find such power in your words :)

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Azif]

Really great piece, the wording structure and the description goes really well together.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much!

[Jackie]

i love the picture, and the words.a lot of big words. you sound very intelligent. and the vocabulary made it sound sophisticated.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[pia]

nice poem
learned a great deal of words. you have good vocab
but what you need to learn is how to turn those vibes into such that would give out a poetic ambiance, the poem itself was clever and great. it would have been made even great if there was simplicity
other than that i think you have done a great job

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks from the depth of my heart! I appreciate your review.

[PandaPeaceful]

Incredibly profound and of great meaning. A unique voice. Good job.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.