Goldie the Goldfish

An emotional poem for my pet Goldie the Goldfish.

You are the charm of my little bowl,

Your skin and scale so orange

Like a pleasing sunset. I extol

your charm that no one can challenge.

I am happy as a clam,

whenever I struck with your glance,

Even during my toughest exam,

Seeing you means my luck is enhanced.

I love how you eat

Like a bird feeds on seeds.

How can I forget your sweet

water bubbles which everybody heeds.

O, Goldie! You are the precious part of my kin,

"Don't ever leave me", came a voice from within.

Author's Note

You would fall in love with her on the very first sight!

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

Very cute poem, and just from your description in this one I can just imagine how much joy Goldie must bring you.
"You are the charm of my little bowl,
Your skin and scale so orange
Like a pleasing sunset. I extol
your charm that no one can challenge."
That first stanza starts this one off great here, and I loved this poem. Good job!

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching representation of love that lives and breathes in us all, well done, good read.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

I how I love goldfish and to watch them swim- my favourite are the bubble eye ones- have had many- so graceful - always wondered how it must be just swimming around and around- reminds me of the song- ‘ I wish you were here ‘, Pink Floyd- wonderful and peaceful are your words🌹

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure🌹

[Weeping willow]

Nice little write about a simple Goldfish ;-]

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[NEHA]

I love the last stanza...it describes that special warmth which you relish with your"goldie"!I loved it n I wish I had one...someone like you have!
#claps

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[Najam Us Saher]

This reminds me of my poem 'Fishbowl' do read you will like it. Here's the link
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Najamsaher97/1972800/

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a charming poem that will be liked by all !

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.

[AllauraRose]

I had two fish and they lasted for two years and I was so sad when they died because even though they were just fish, I still grew to love them. Great job!

[Raj Sahu]

Oh! This is really sad. Thank you.

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

I remember having goldfish as well as other fish growing up. Beautifully written tribute to your pet goldfish....

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.

[sette]

and it is so wonderful to have a pet to brighten up your day so take care of her

[Raj Sahu]

Sure and thank you.

[Richard Slader]

Cute poem, personally I am more of a dog person but I understand the emotional attachment on can have with a personal or family pet.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much!