Be My Tourniquet

I burst out with this poem when I felt unbearably miserable in the absence of love

When my heart bleeds

Be my tourniquet...

Wrap your love around me

And numb the pain away

Coz theses needles of pain

Are pouring down on me like rain

Prick me with your kisses

And lull the pain away.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is a stunning honesty here... the emotional anguish that can be so overwhelming, and yet that one person can wash over the heart and mind with a healing like no other... a salve to stop the soul's bleeding out. Powerful image so hard to shake.

[MoriartyMesa]

I had the vision of two lovers laying in bed, kissing, holding, and loving....


Nice job

[TheReal]

Short, sweet, to the point :)

[eeoopig]

great job - I really like this poem XD

[YourMajesty2102]

I like this one! Good job!

[Kaylor Mason]

That's one bandage that doesn't ever hurt.

[Whiskurz]

I really liked this piece.....Whisk

[Suditi]

A beautifully crafted poem.
Short but overflowing with emotions.
Great work there!

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully written.