Worthless Lovers

May be I was furious with how "some men" treat their women. The words just ran all over the paper.

To all the worthless lovers,

Who treat women like s**t,

Just know this bit brethren

That you are in a deep dark pit.

Cowards and spineless maggots,

How can you ever act like so?

When you

Spoil,stamp your girl’s heart

Like there is nothing more.

Do you know what love is?

Do you care what it’s all about?

Never a worry to you is that,

For all you care about is

Flesh, flesh, flesh!

So there I call you “filthy pigs”,

Your days are not going to last.

Every moment will be filled with regret,

Coz of ill-treating your worthy lass.

Author's Note

No hard feelings men, if you are not one of them types!! This is just some intense writing....please feel free to share your thoughts.

Reviews

[jainendra nagar]

nic writing...ya we men treat girls as a flesh at some moments but its natural, we always respect girls but at some moments we wondered from our thoughts, its not tolerable or be pardoned but we tried our best to treat u girls like princess. At some moment of a relationship its good to be parted away for the sake of both, at that moment we behave heart less and hide our feelings...
thought provoking write...keep it up

[YourMajesty2102]

Wow great work! Loved this one!

[Brittany]

Wooo! Great ranting. Loved it.

[Distant horizons]

vividly vented, and no offence takn :-)

[Emrick]

waa.thats really harsh.but its nice.hope when those types of men come across this,to feel it.n try to change.