The moment

Beneath the dark clouds,
Flash for a moment.
Set in motion,my universe in pause.
Redraw the castle on the highest sky.
Bring me back from the dead,
To relive in the moment of you,
For a second or shorter than that
For a second or longer than that.
Or
Undo the spell,
Break the cage open,Set free my wings.
As I fly above the dark clouds,
Don't rise higher than me,
I shall pass all but you.
To land,to breathe in a non-You valley.
For a second or shorter than that.
For a second or longer than that.

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like this piece.. It seems sad and full of longing.. The repitition makes it sound good.. Nice reading it....

[Emmy]

Either a moment of beautiful memories of love back into reality or The freedom from the cage of memories.
A brilliant piece indeed

[Rifatt Mir]

Thankyou emmy :)

[Rifatt Mir]

Thankyou emmy :)

[Nisreen]

Love is the one cure of all
Nothing brings everything back to life like being in love

This is a very warm piece

[Rifatt Mir]

Thank you for your review :)