Moon

Dedicated to my brightest moon - Kim SeokJin

There is blue in every color
you are still golden to me,
In bleak and gloomy nights
That only your warmth can pierce.
So do I close my eyes, will you paint my dreams?
Or will you stay longer and color my blues?

And I wonder if it is really you
Hanging with me this lonely night
But Could anything else be this magical ?
Like a floating paradise In the darkest sky.
So do I whisper my heart to you, will my secrets reach as far?
Or will you listen to stillness in me and sing me to sleep again tonight?

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely piece. The reader has to make their mind up to whom these words refer. Is it a love or is it the allure of the moon. Whatever, it adds to the intrigue. Adds a little mystery. That's good in my book.

Chris

[John the Baptist]

Very romantic piece and very well phrased, unlike many romance poems. Is the speaker addressing the moon or an unseen love? That question just heightens the romance.