Rialidiz

From beggining there was no way.

They thought they'll explode.

I just smiled and turned away,

and everything in start was wrong.

Reviews

[wordwarrior]

Very well penned and this has such a strong message in its brevity.

[Mia]

What else is there to do but turn away and hope for the best in a seemingly hopeless situation from the start! Short, sweet and to the point!

[rankoranko]

yeah, something like that :) glad you like it

[Rick Puetter]

Yes, many times things start off on the wrong foot or with crazy expectations. There is little else to do, then, but to turn away when anything you say will make no difference.

Been there.

Best regards,

Rick

[rankoranko]

indeed :) thank you Rick!

[Mockingbird]

sounds like a display of being indifferent and jaded to what is going on around him. sounds like he's been there before. kind of existential, too. great job.

[rankoranko]

great review indeed, thank you! :)

[isus]

nice poetry from you too!

[rankoranko]

Thank you very much! :D