I miss you,you miss me

Dearest soul, I miss us,the two of us. Don't we have a date soon?

My soul seeks you,particularly at night
Seeing a blinking big star,in a distance.
No wonder,your curious eyes get busy,
At the far-viewed illumination,we see.

All the time,my heart knows you,my dear.
Remembering me,I could really perceive.
Kindly feel me,please.I'm saying " I love you.
Remain in my innermost and I'll proclaim you.

My overload mind occupies much about you.
Eager to hear, you are safe and on the go.
I send a short text message " How are you?!"
Care and answer me promptly,as you always do.

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

Very beautiful!
a warm caring feeling
is felt while reading this piece

Great write!

Orlando M

[Nico]

short but with a lot of meaning...I loved it!!!!

[Amanda]

a very heartfelt poem. it touches my heart and soul...i feel the yearning of missing the person this is addressed to.

good work,

Amanda = )

[E. M. Murren]

This is a touching work. Your style is really nice. It is genuine and honest. I like it a lot. I like this a lot. Well done.