The End

That is my poem about the apocalypes

I am something that will never come
the end of age
predicted at every age
a different end of days
created each new day
The apocalypes is your prediction
but every generation predicted an end
a common human trend
Bring Nukes, Bring 2012, & Y2K
but humanity seems to stay
After the USSR the sun rose
After Y2K the sun rose
DEcember 22 2012 That day will come
bring your theories however strange
but nothing will ever change

Reviews

[hates display names]

ok well both ppl tht reveiwed this had a hard time interpreting it so if ur one of those ppl know that, Y2K was an apocaplyitic theorie it was supposed to happen in the new milnium and back then ppl were freaking out, during the cold war ppl thought there would be a nuclear induced apocalypse and it is sed tht in december 21 2012 the world will end I hope this explains any confusion

[Renesmee Carlie Cullen]

I don't understand this at all.
You first need to explain some stuff in the poem, and you need to slow down on it.
Rushing is what often leads to failure so my advice to you is to take your time on your writing.
Also, would you mind reviewing something of mine?
Thank you.

[Dreamer (Kristen)]

you believe what you believe, I believe what I believe.
Personally, I don't really believe that the apocalypse will be in 2012, but that's just me.....