Anarchists smile

Ain't as good compared 2 my other poems but it's my most recent anarchistic poem

Sittinjg in front of the news
reading about fires
someone scorched parlement
that fuels your desire
Its the fuel which is the destination
Sit on the couch watch a state
that you hate
its destruction you debate
Its destruction is your construction
but a teen cannot build a pheonix alone
and anarchist becomes an insult
WHY?
for trying to creat REAL equility, REAL liberty
a government cannot make it only fake it
and force citizens to contort to their repulsive norm
They take everything and give some back
one day we'll attack
one day goverments will be obsolite
leaders heed my warning start mourning
people won't always let thhemselves live as shackled sheeple

Reviews

[Renesmee Carlie Cullen]

This is what I mean by rushing. You have a lot of pelling errors, and the words of the poem don't flow well.
I as the best corrector in the class, see a bunch of errors.
My advice to you would be to keep it like this so you can spot your mistakes.
Also, try putting it in a word processor-- it will help you with grammer as well as help you catch your mistakes.
Now then, I am going to review your other piece of writing.